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Dark Poetry #1

A Complicated Mess

~Venus~
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 128

0 posted 2000-02-10 07:31 PM

I try to describe my feelings
toward you,
and your name is on my mind
constantly
yet you are not the one I truly love.
For I love another,
not of this world,
and yet I feel strong feelings for you.
It can't be love,
for you are not him...
But these feelings that run rampant
confuse me...
What are these feelings I feel toward you?
I can't call it love,
and yet I do.

Help me...

~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

*She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd*

EMG
Junior Member

since 2000-02-09

Posts 10

1 posted 2000-02-10 07:55 PM

Venus,
Your poem is very sad to me. I feel as if my TRUE love of almost three years is now seeing things from your perspective. Unfortunately there is nothing I can do, as you said there is nothing she can do either--feelings are feelings. Regardless, good poem. Eli

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

2 posted 2000-02-10 09:35 PM

Another lovely poem. Love the inconsistencies.
Jannel

"I'm just saying
that we've mistaken one
for thousands of words,
and for that mistake
I've caused you such pain
that I damn that word."
-10000 Maniacs "Jezebel"

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-10 11:14 PM

VERY good poem Venus...as always...
yes...call it love...theres enough room for two...(smile) take care, janet marie

...found your heart-then lost your lover...licked your wounds then run for cover...
take your time...there will be another...
and dont make the same mistake twice...
unless you can pay the price...
Dan Fogelberg

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2000-02-10 11:51 PM

I believe you can love more than one, easily. Well done.

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

TanAngel
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

5 posted 2000-02-11 09:14 PM

Venus-
I understand how you feel. Love feels differant ways depending on the person. Not all love feels the same.

"Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

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