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Till they hurt me to death!
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Till they hurt me to death! |
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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
Life indeed has been a vicious curse, Smiling all the while , Inside plotting and betraying, Its evil mind lingering at every twisted plot that rapes me, Written for me , given to me by those hidden sinister powers, Each hand that I hold, Each breath that I take, Is tinged up with the miseries of my past and present, People come and go in my life, Like broken, lying , forgotten seasons , Some touch me like winter , some heat me up like summer, But when the time comes , the winds silently carries them to another world, No one for me to keep, Each promise which is whispered in my ears, Now I know is nothing but a gamble between my life and my loved ones, Winner are those who hurt me to death! sf |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
keep the faith...very well written... very deep thoughts... i liked it a lot you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Very expressive, Faith. I like how you compare the people you have met and know to the seasons. This is so true now that I think about it. Joy |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
liked this, especialy the seasons thing and the line "no one for me to keep." jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
Thank u all for your suppport n comments !  they mean a lot ... all i want is honesty! faith |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
faith... this is VERY well written and very well expressed...I also liked the comparisons to the seasons. very good work...janet marie ...found your heart-then lost your lover...licked your wounds then run for cover... take your time...there will be another... and dont make the same mistake twice... unless you can pay the price... Dan Fogelberg |
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