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I felt it all erasing me......
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I felt it all erasing me...... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
all the pretty things are free feel the rise ..isolate me raise the expectations high drown that ghost and never question why make it feel incomplete give a reason present defeat judge the fallen become intense spread your everything but wear it all underneath.. simple pleasures never mine im the TYPE of empty person that wont survive the test of time.. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Liked the poem, but I don't believe the ending is true, you can survive anything you put your mind to. With hope and love you'll master your destiny... Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is very good..VERY well written and expressed... " all the pretty things are free feel the rise ..isolate me raise the expectations high drown that ghost and never question why" very good..I like this part a lot. janet marie ...found your heart-then lost your lover...licked your wounds then run for cover... take your time...there will be another... and dont make the same mistake twice... unless you can pay the price... Dan Fogelberg |
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