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Michael
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since 1999-08-13
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California

0 posted 2000-02-10 08:34 AM


BY LOVE DENIED

Met on what seemed a honeymoon,
Guess it wasn't quite your dream come true.
Maybe the excitement was too much for us to stand.

We went overboard way to soon,
Landing in separate oceans of blue.
I never got to place this ring upon your hand.

I guess one never should assume,
But something led me to believe
There could be no other in this life for me.

But now this dark and lonely room
Leaves only one truth to perceive,
I'm missing you but you're not missing me.

Was it by Fate, was it by chance,
That faced with love, you turned away.
It seems expectations were set too high.

But tell me by what circumstance
Dark eyes voice what you would not say.
Girl, did I not at least deserve, "goodbye".

In silence I open the drawer
Where your poems still sing for me.
With a sigh I set the ring inside.

Closing a dream for evermore,
I know I now must leave you be,
But I wish you love, if but by love denied.


Michael Anderson



 It's the little things you take for granted,
That'll mean the most to you when they're gone.





© Copyright 2000 Michael Anderson - All Rights Reserved
danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
1 posted 2000-02-10 10:22 AM


Micheal-it takes an incredible person to wish love for the one who took theirs from you. another wonderful yet sad piece.
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-10 11:04 AM


this is a deeply touching and moving piece.
very very good...as is everything I read of yours...I love the ending verse of this one, sadly beautiful,janet marie

 ...baby, dont you work so hard for this prize you found...
it will all be gone when you turn around...
cause ... nothin' lasts forever anyway...
Rick Roberts-Windmills


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 2000-02-10 03:25 PM


Michael...I don't know what to say, this brought tears to my eyes....oh how sad.
Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
4 posted 2000-02-10 03:25 PM


Michael, I don't know what to say, I was so sure the two of you would dance underneath the stars forever more. Know that you have many friends you can lean on, so when the wall feels to hard know that you can come talk anytime. God Bless You always, you will be in my prayers
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