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Bojopy
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

0 posted 2000-02-09 08:21 PM

The splitting splendors of obscruity
were lucubrate upon thy pages
The meek nowhereness once were
brought a babel from those ages
The preverse methods of revel
debackled and salvaged a sluice
Now those mountians in memory
have brought upon a new truth

From the toil and dread of time
until this awaiting unknown day
The search and struggle from within
took a blasphemous scorned way
But the worth of any God
clenched back thy own sanity
And put a devine drive
for success in thy minds reality
< !signature-->

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)

[This message has been edited by Bojopy (edited 02-09-2000).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-09 09:27 PM

another Excellent work of art from Bojo,
this one is so great..it flows and reads so well..and I love the gothic, english literature words used. very good, as always

take care, janet marie

...baby, dont you work so hard for this prize you found...it will all be gone when you turn around...nothin' lasts forever anyway...
Rick Roberts-Windmills

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 2000-02-10 11:43 AM

yeah! what janet said!

another great one.

Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear.
-Tool-

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2000-02-10 01:16 PM

Some Deep thought culminating into a fine work here, bojopy. Great poem.

Michael

AVANTI
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE

4 posted 2000-02-10 01:28 PM

wonderful poem...i have to admit...the deep thoughts took me a while to get into flow...
beautifully written..bojopy
see ya around< !signature-->

you don't have to understand completely..to love completely...
remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao

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Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

5 posted 2000-02-10 03:25 PM

I very much liked the use of a classical poetic style in this instance. Nice work.
Jannel

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 2000-02-11 05:46 PM

Bo, you still having those worries/questions?
But as for the poem I too loved the style.
Great as always my friend

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

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