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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
If you fall helpless beneath the winds and rain of life, I will lift you up and be your shelter from the storm If you should find that you are lost, All you need do is turn around and take my hand, I will guide you home If your crystalline dreams fall shattered from your mind, I'll kneel beside you to pick up the pieces from the floor If you feel persecuted by this cold, ruthless world, I'll wash the crimson from your face and remove you crown of thorns If you become blided in shadows of solitude, The light of my love will fall on you to help you see You're not alone If you long to hear a word that's true, Just rest your head upon my breast and listen as my heart speaks of love for you If you ever want for a place to hide from whatever you feel is burdening you, Just simply think of me as your sanctuary Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
danni, this is absolutly beautiful...full of beautiful expressions and emotions... there is something so poetic about the word sanctuary...(smile) take care, janet marie "...she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough...I'm a little bit rusty...and I feel like my head is caving in, and I dont know if I've ever been really loved- by a hand thats touched me, and I feel like somethings gonna give...and I'm a little bit angry... Well...this aint over..NO not yet...not while I still need you around"... matchbox 20 |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
thank you so very much, Janet, for your kind words.  Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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gypsyqlt Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 147Bradford,Vt USA |
Well Danni, This was beautiful, gentle, loving. great work ! Jocelyn |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
What a wonderful discovery it would be to find your sanctuary. This poem was very nice and well written. Danny |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
jocelyn- thank you for your kind words-exactly what i was going for. Danny-many thanks to you also! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is very comforting. I think we all need a sanctuary. James |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
James-you are right, we do. thank you for the kind comment. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, beautiful and comforting, indeed. A lovely poem, danni. Michael |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Danni: This is a beautiful well expressed poem. You have a way with words. I loved it. My favourite stanzas were stanza 3 and stanza 4. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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~Red~ Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 36chicago, Ill-na, u.s.a. |
awwwww...this was so nice n pretty...i really loved this piece danni...keep it up, hun~ ~Why is it that you beleive in perfection my friend? For perfection is a dream, it shall never be acheived. So tell me why you beleive in perfection?....For PErfection doesn't exist..~ |
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