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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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The Strong One |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
The Strong One The other day you told me Something I'd never forget, You told me what you really thought, What you really felt, I have always admired The way you stand tall, But you look different than you feel You feel like you might fall, You asked me what I thought of you now, I said your still the same You didn't believe me, but how, I speak the truth Not a lie, I tell you what I feel Even though you just might cry, You'll always be My best friend, Even when we die and we descend, You may be The broken one, But I promise that I'll never run, You've been hurt And you have fallen, But I'm here And will be here when you come a callin' by Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Hey, this is great!!! I REALLY hope to hear more from you. What true words are spoken. "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
another great one Bronx!!! and a comforting thought...to know someone will always be there for a friend. what a very nice tribute to your friend... take care, janet marie < !signature--> ..."when you walked into the room...I saw their faces--- did you know--you made it seem like time was standing still... and I felt---fascination...though I only knew you then--just casually... then you slowly turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart gave me away".... Glass Tiger [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 02-08-2000).] |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Another great poem. I love the way you write, and I'm not lying. But you need to make sure this friend knows that you feel this way, or some unwanted results may happen...although sometimes, if you tell a person how you feel, they run away and ignore you... ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ *She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd* |
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Keli1019 Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31FL |
Bronx~ I loved this poem! It brought a tear to my eye, because your poems are so true. You write really, really good and I can't wait to read another one of your poems!  "It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a day to love someone- but it takes a lifetime to forget someone." |
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DayDreamer Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 30 |
You know, Bronx, when I met you I had no idea you wrote so well. I never would have guessed. ^_^ Always remember to stay strong. DayDreamer ((aka Jodi)) "You can't change anything by just sitting back and looking at it."~Cloud |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Ok- Just to say. The "friend" in the poem I just wrote does not exist. I just wrote stuff on paper and it sounded nice! Now the Poem about the friend I may never have IS real. I think I'll post it in our school anthology. I knew it was you DayDreamer. 'cause only you would quote Cloud! Thanx to everyone who seems to think I write well. Your encouragement is always welcome. And Yes DayDreamer I do write this good! Well according to you NEways. Poetically yours Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
bronx...that was a good one...very imaginative i must say...cause ou mentioned the friend does not exist... liked it a lot  you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I can relate this poem to someone in my life, Bronx. It's amazing how we see their strengths but never their weaknesses sometimes. A beautiful poem, I may add. Enjoyed this one much. Michael |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well written. I'll further what Michael said, you don't see their weaknesses until it is too late!! Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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