Dark Poetry #1 |
Dark Night |
TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Dark Night Oh, Dark Night where are your eyes? I can not find your soul Could it be you are greater than me? Of course! You are the Dark Night conqurere of souls Never for anyone but one, which is never me It is forbidden I do You die See the problem? See my curse? Stars fall as a river of tears And I call upon my soul keeper to put me to death I shall overcome my fears Never to be lost in the glance of what I thought was your love "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
sad but beautiful words... i am still wondering if i interpretted it right??? i'll ponder on that... see you around you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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Lady Bere Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73Valmeyer, Illinois USA |
Beautiful. All I can say is thank you for sharing. Without darkness there is no light Without the light we cannot see the dark Balance...It heals the soul |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
hauntingly lovely......makes one think and that to me is a wonderfully written poem. There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Not sure I understand the theme of your poem but I like the style of your writing. Nice work! Danny |
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