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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Slip on by my love leave me in the past I am not of you I merely love you and who am I Do not see me go As I leave this room do not see me cry as i face my doom Just turn away and smile Fear not for me For i am only past my future is gone molded with yours till i am no more No only the past am i where i no longer wish I was to been and gone in the non time ago before you were mine So look away as i go Blinded by the sun walking on into the rain And all i have my pain Washing down a drain Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Walter, I LOVE this beautiful sad poem. Its expressions and emotions are so well shared. I could relate to his one well, and I like the widsom of your signature quote as well take care,janet marie ..."when you walked into the room...I saw their faces--- did you know--you made it seem like time was standing still... and I felt---fascination...though I only knew you then--just casually... then you slowly turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart gave me away".... Glass Tiger |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Thank you what more can be said?? Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
This poem is pretty, however a sad poem could be pretty. I still don't understand that conceipt. "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
walter- you have such a way with words. this was a great piece, as most of yours are. Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
love is ultimately negative true love is ultimately destructive all true pain is a direct effect of these two emotions beautiful is sad, Sad is beautiful. As buddha would have said. Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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