Dark Poetry #1 |
Friends for Life |
Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hi yall i wrote this poem for a really good friend before i moved. i never got a chance to give it to her. but i owe her my life. if it wasnt for her i might not be here right now. it was the first poem i ever wrote. i havent heard from this girl in around 12 years. hopefully she will see this and contact me. so paula if your out there, this one is for you. hope yall like it. FRIENDS FOR LIFE She is a real friend Someone I will never forget We've been best friends Since the frist day that we met I know all her secrets And she knows all of mine She's the only one I trust And I think thats just fine But I must be leaving town now Thus I'm leaving her But I never will forget her Thats for certain sure She will always hold the key That will unlock my heart The pain of me leaving her Is like being shot by a dart But I never will forget her No matter how long were apart Because she will always hold a special place Deep inside my heart... Jesse C. Jaymz True beauty is often hidden in darkness... ~Jesse C. Jaymz~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Jesse, this is SO sweet and great...and its a wonderful tribute to your friend...and to friendship everlasting...how wonderful that this was your first poem...the first moment of inspiration and the gift of poetry given thru friendship... Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Jesse, Indeed this is beautiful. It's so sad that so many friends fall along the way. At the time neither party seems to realise what they are losing... Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
a sweet tribute indeed. tis a wonderful thing to have a friendship as such. tis a shame you lost touch. well done. Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
*blushes* :0 thanks yall. this poem means alot to me and i was almost afriad to post it. but i knew i had nothing to fear. thanks again yall. this means alot to me. True beauty is often hidden in darkness... ~Jesse C. Jaymz~ |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Jesse... i hope paula reads that ... that was really straight from the heart... 12 years and still so close...that is so wonderful...i can only imagine how you feel.. see ya around... you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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