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Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

0 posted 2000-02-04 09:46 PM


hi yall
i wrote this poem for a really good friend before i moved.  i never got a chance to give it to her.  but i owe her my life.  if it wasnt for her i might not be here right now.  it was the first poem i ever wrote.  i havent heard from this girl in around 12 years.  hopefully she will see this and contact me.  so paula if your out there, this one is for you.  hope yall like it.

FRIENDS FOR LIFE

She is a real friend
Someone I will never forget
We've been best friends
Since the frist day that we met
I know all her secrets
And she knows all of mine
She's the only one I trust
And I think thats just fine
But I must be leaving town now
Thus I'm leaving her
But I never will forget her
Thats for certain sure
She will always hold the key
That will unlock my heart
The pain of me leaving her
Is like being shot by a dart
But I never will forget her
No matter how long were apart
Because she will always hold a special place
Deep inside my heart...

Jesse C. Jaymz


 True beauty is often hidden in darkness...
~Jesse C. Jaymz~

© Copyright 2000 Jesse Jaymz - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-04 11:35 PM


Jesse,
this is SO sweet and great...and its a wonderful tribute to your friend...and to friendship everlasting...how wonderful that this was your first poem...the first moment of inspiration and the gift of poetry given thru friendship...


 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-02-05 12:21 PM


Jesse,
Indeed this is beautiful.  It's so sad that so many friends fall along the way.  At the time neither party seems to realise what they are losing...

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
3 posted 2000-02-05 08:43 PM


a sweet tribute indeed. tis a wonderful thing to have a friendship as such. tis a shame you lost touch. well done.  

 Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear.
-Tool-

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
4 posted 2000-02-05 11:02 PM


*blushes* :0  thanks yall.  this poem means alot to me and i was almost afriad to post it.  but i knew i had nothing to fear.  thanks again yall.   this means alot to me.

 True beauty is often hidden in darkness...
~Jesse C. Jaymz~

AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
5 posted 2000-02-09 12:34 PM


Jesse...
i hope paula reads that ...
that was really straight from the heart...
12 years and still so close...that is so wonderful...i can only imagine how you feel..
see ya around...


 you don't have to understand completely..to love completely...
remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao



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