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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-02-05 08:14 PM


I look at you
You remind me
Of what is lost

What I always wanted
All my life I have searched

What causes such pain
What I wan so much

What I want to find
My lost life
I have to find you
I need to know
But I need you
Most of all


-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-05 08:23 PM


another beautiful piece of work from our resident goddess...(smile)
take care, janet marie

 ..."when you walked into the room...I saw their faces---
did you know--you made it seem like time was standing still...
and I felt---fascination...though I only knew you then--just casually...
then you slowly turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart gave me away"....

Glass Tiger



danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 2000-02-05 08:58 PM


hmmmmm....so many times we feel so lost that we might never find our way. it is hard, but believe things happen for a reason. you cannot find yourself in another. you must first love yourself, then search within to find what you seek. then it is possible to find the love that is pure and true from another, and it will lead you to places you never could have imagined.
Apologies if I read too deep. Just my romantic heart and mind running away with me. It is sad to see so much hurt and longing. may brighter, fuller days lie ahead of you.  

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