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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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The promise Betraying one The one is myself The happiness The joy The tears one has cried The hurt and the pain All up inside I took all of what I loved The love I found Praying that somehow, some way This can be healed Trusting in God to help me Help me to find what lies beneath Retreating into my shell I don't want to go there again The love I found that drew me out I can't lose it now I do not know the words These words just touch barely the surface Of what I feel and what I have to say I want so badly to give what is locked up inside Hidden away in the back of the mind Tucked away where one cannot find Chaotic, abstract These things I feel and see Only I understand, sense, and perceive These wonderful things tied up in me I can barely explain One was so close but now far away Second guessing all of my dreams Everything that I love Everything that I still hold true I stomped on them ever so hard Hurting Pain No one grasps this pain I feel The regret The dream The hope |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Well done Justbleu.  It's not unusual to feel alone with your thoughts and emotions....only to later discover that you are not. ~*Dark Enchantress*~ "Enjoy the little things in life, for one day you may look back and realize they were the big things." -Antonio Smith |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You Maharet for your sweet thoughts!! Bridgette |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
justblueu, this is a beautiful poem of self discovery and expression. I loved it! Glad I got to see it. take care janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
All too true, people say they understand etc. But does anyone every really??? Well done Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
every time we are hurt, it makes it harder for the next person to get inside, to see who we are and what we have to offer. it even gets harder for us to remember who we are. emotions well captured. nice work. Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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