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Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-02-04 09:26 PM


As I get sicker
A deasise flows threw me
I feel scared
The one person I need
Doesn't know
How much I need him now

The doctors tell me
The new stuff
Should calm me down
It makes me realize
Just how sad and alone
I am

All my life I have wanted
To be happy
For just one moment
Yet here I am still alone
As ever


-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)


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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-04 11:56 PM


Neala,
I'm sorry you feel so sad, if only the doctors really knew how to help us from feeling this way... if only they had a magic pill... but the poetry and writing does help heal. Does your do that for you, it does me.


 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-02-05 12:41 PM


Neala, Sorry you are under the weather.  Is it an illness or depression if I may ask?  You know I am always around if you need to talk ok?  I agree with Janet pity they didn't have a magic pill.  Anyway this poem was great, sad and longing.
But passions can help you vent, remember that. (HUGS)

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
3 posted 2000-02-05 07:57 PM


Thank you Janet Marie and Isis.
And Isis to answer you question i suffer from depression but i have lupus
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-02-05 08:16 PM


dear Neala, thank you for sharing yourself...it helps us to understand..so many of the poems in here break my heart...some are so filled with sadness. I truly sympathise with you, my daughter who is 16 has Chronic Fatigue Syndrome and Fibromyalgia. They thought she had Lupis at first.  I know how hard being ill is on a person... the toll is takes...I will think of you in my prayers. take care sweetie... try to stay strong. Janet Marie
danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
5 posted 2000-02-05 09:14 PM


Neala, my sympathies on your illness. May God bless you with the strength to keep on. May you one day find the love meant for you. It is out there somewhere.
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