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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
DandelionMeltdownFloat You came to me, A ginger nest of sweet dreams and never never lands. Compile my dainty ways a prom queen in a pixie parade… Judge me like a Dandelion, and blow my seeds out to the world. Maybe one will be left unscratched…a windmill Playland for the corn girl. What dreams may come… A make believe swing pushed up to the Blue, blue sky swirling and twirling and never getting by. Compromise my inner sea at the price of a one cent thought that could crush you with a glassy stare. I'm tired… and your not finished Playing on my grounds. Kudos to you… my "friend" with the Big Hand and Heart made out of dead poppies. Weakened to a sullen state of mind… But I'm not finished yet, It's my turn to play On your grounds. And the ginger nest is turning cold this year. A maze of defined DENIAl… Puts me in my place. Ending your beginnings is the only way because... You came to me. ~Carman~ [This message has been edited by armanca (edited 02-05-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is SO great...I love the imagery and the things it makes me think of...really nice take care, janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Thank you Janet Marie....You are always so kind. *smile* Carman |
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