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Dark Poetry #1

Where Am I

summer
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 80
long beach .ca.usa

0 posted 2000-02-02 08:32 PM

I am neither here nor there.
I'm not happy or sad.
I feel as if I can never see you again, but long to see you gaze upon me. I am imprisoned withen these four walls and bound to this bed that once was alive and burning filled with the scent of both of us. Set me free into the light, I want to fly again thru the mystery of loves wonders. Have I fallen into one of lifes doors maked "illusions" or am I to sit here in Gods presence and learn of pateince. Wherever I am, again I am cold, despertly begging for your warmth, smotherihng myself in these sheets that surrounded mere perfection.

[This message has been edited by summer (edited 02-02-2000).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-02 09:42 PM

this is emotionally beautiful summer...
love's sadder side, but still a very lovely poem. take care, janet marie

Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

2 posted 2000-02-03 12:00 PM

Beatiful longing and loneliness. Especially "bound to this bed that was once alive" Really like that line. You may want to change the fromat to be easier to read, but the words are great the way they are.
Jannel

~Venus~
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 128

3 posted 2000-02-04 08:57 AM

I loved it, Summer. I too feel this way, and am glad to see I am not alone. I will have to check the boards for more of your lovely work.

~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

TanAngel
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

4 posted 2000-02-04 03:18 PM

What a beautiful poem. I hope to see a lot more of your work around!!

"Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

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