Dark Poetry #1 |
Midnight Haze |
armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
My Midnight Butterfly a wingful taste... to my heart and soul. I long for you... and in the days you shall not be I'll send for you My Midnight Butterfly. ~Carman~ ***This was written for my younger sister. She is in love for the first time in her life. And she wanted something special to write to her love, and she came to me. This was what I came up with.**** |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
Fitting and sweet, with no wasted words. I loved it. Jannel |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
carman: a lovely piece, and in light of whom it was written for, all that more beautiful... again, you leave me without criticism... wonderful job sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Thank you Jannel..You're always kind. Poetry_Kills...Funny thing that you write me now. I have just been to your homepage...thumbing through everything. May I be to bold and ask you for your email address? I'd like to send you some other poetry. (That I think you might like) Otherwise...here's mine ([email protected]). I'd like to read more of your work. Carman |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
carman: check your email and get back to me when you have the time sincerely, jerome the boy whose roomate is beating up patrick A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Thank you Jerome... |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
simple ans sweet...best of luck to your kid sis... |
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