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armanca
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee

0 posted 2000-02-02 10:54 PM


My Midnight Butterfly
a wingful taste...
to my heart and soul.
I long for you...
and in the days
you shall not be
I'll send for you
My Midnight Butterfly.


~Carman~

***This was written for my younger sister.  She is in love for the first time in her life.  And she wanted something special to write to her love, and she came to me.  This was what I came up with.****

© Copyright 2000 Carman - All Rights Reserved
Jannel
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
1 posted 2000-02-02 11:08 PM


Fitting and sweet, with no wasted words. I loved it.
Jannel

poetry_kills
Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
2 posted 2000-02-02 11:13 PM


carman: a lovely piece, and in light of whom it was written for, all that more beautiful... again, you leave me without criticism... wonderful job  

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no brain

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

armanca
Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
3 posted 2000-02-02 11:28 PM


Thank you Jannel..You're always kind.


Poetry_Kills...Funny thing that you write me now.  I have just been to your homepage...thumbing through everything.  May I be to bold and ask you for your email address?  I'd like to send you some other poetry. (That I think you might like) Otherwise...here's mine (Ckilli11@aol.com).  I'd like to read more of your work.

Carman

poetry_kills
Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
4 posted 2000-02-02 11:47 PM


carman: check your email and get back to me when you have the time  

sincerely,
jerome the boy whose roomate is beating up patrick

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

armanca
Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
5 posted 2000-02-03 11:42 PM


Thank you Jerome...
AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
6 posted 2000-02-04 12:32 PM


simple ans sweet...best of luck to your kid sis...
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