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AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE

0 posted 2000-02-03 11:26 PM




I wrote this verse for a close friend of mine
a part of me...
Rach...
This is yours to keep...
with love
Avanti

              LOOK WITHIN...

Sometimes we tread unknown paths in our lives and we wonder if we reaching destiny..with so much toil

Sometimes we find ourselves on the same known roads and still so lost so uncertain....

Life plays these tricks on us...

But if you put trust in yourself and hope above the sky’s and tread all those paths and even more....

You’ll come out like the rainbow after the rain...

And remember...believe in what you can do...and that you've always done yourself proud.. don't forget that....

So come through for yourself...and let your colours show way up there in the sky...

wishing you the best...always...

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[This message has been edited by AVANTI (edited 02-10-2000).]

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armanca
Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
1 posted 2000-02-03 11:29 PM


What an absolutely beautiful piece.  It speaks right to the heart.  It touched me and made me think.  *smile*


Carman

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-02-03 11:35 PM


Beautiful thoughts, and the same for you.  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-04 12:03 PM


thank you for this uplifting and very good poem of encouragment...self discovery is hard to come by sometimes.
janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
4 posted 2000-02-10 02:13 PM


thakyou all for reading...

This verse is close to my heart and it's good to know you all liked it


 you don't have to understand completely..to love completely...
remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao



AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
5 posted 2000-02-10 02:14 PM


thakyou all for reading...

This verse is close to my heart and it's good to know you all liked it


 you don't have to understand completely..to love completely...
remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao



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