Dark Poetry #1 |
Look Within ~~~~dedicated~~~~ |
AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
I wrote this verse for a close friend of mine a part of me... Rach... This is yours to keep... with love Avanti LOOK WITHIN... Sometimes we tread unknown paths in our lives and we wonder if we reaching destiny..with so much toil Sometimes we find ourselves on the same known roads and still so lost so uncertain.... Life plays these tricks on us... But if you put trust in yourself and hope above the sky’s and tread all those paths and even more.... You’ll come out like the rainbow after the rain... And remember...believe in what you can do...and that you've always done yourself proud.. don't forget that.... So come through for yourself...and let your colours show way up there in the sky... wishing you the best...always... < !signature--> [This message has been edited by AVANTI (edited 02-10-2000).] |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
What an absolutely beautiful piece. It speaks right to the heart. It touched me and made me think. *smile* Carman |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful thoughts, and the same for you. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thank you for this uplifting and very good poem of encouragment...self discovery is hard to come by sometimes. janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
thakyou all for reading... This verse is close to my heart and it's good to know you all liked it you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
thakyou all for reading... This verse is close to my heart and it's good to know you all liked it you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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