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Lil OnE
Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

0 posted 2000-02-03 01:21 PM


My tears are silent
to everyone else.
But to my heart, they are excriciatingly loud.



 You don't know me, but you don't like me.
You say you could care less how I feel.
But how many of you who sit and judge me
have ever walked the streets in my shoes?-Korn
~Lil OnE~



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Wendy Flora
Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 182
Virginia
1 posted 2000-02-03 01:27 PM


I like it!  I like the simplistic, honest style.  I like the scorching reality of its brevity.  Bravo! -wen

[This message has been edited by Wendy Flora (edited 02-03-2000).]

danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 2000-02-03 03:45 PM


Sadly, that is often the way it goes. Short yet says alot.
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-02-03 08:48 PM


So true LO but if you surround yourself with loving family and friends, they too will 'hear' your pain.  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



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