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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-01-31 07:34 PM


Dark Delusions
Thoughts
Hopes
Ambistions
Dreams
Fill my mind
WIth needs
And dreams
Plans and Ideas
For other than good


© Copyright 2000 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 2000-02-02 10:15 AM


Dark and foreboding piece.
The mis-spelling of ambitions threw me off just a wee bit.

All in all you captured what you were trying to put across very well    

Jennifer




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~Venus~
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

2 posted 2000-02-03 06:59 PM


Neala--

Call me crazy, but it sounds as though you're going through something tough and taking your emotions in a good place, namely this board. But be careful not to do anything you may regret later, like hurting the ones who care about you most.

But it was a nice poem!

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-02-03 08:40 PM


Dark delusions are only illusions.  I believe you'd never do anything to hurt anyone else, for if the roles were reversed...  Sure we think these things, but it is the strong and special who don't weaken and do them. (HUGS)  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



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