Dark Poetry #1 |
Lost Very Deep Within |
Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Sick of drawing pictures Fear of being nit picked Feeling worthless Through the eyes, of the one you love Drowning in sorrows Hiding within Needing to confront, to explain the pain Walking away instead Knowing myself to be, misunderstood So inturn I do not talk Viscious cycle for me That I only perceive This is detrimental Someday maybe I might be understood |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I think we all must feel misunderstood at some point in our lives. I know I do a lot of the time. But, if I recall, some of the greatest thinkers, and leaders were misunderstood. So that is possibly a good thing! I could relate to well to this poem, Justbleu. JOY |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
With the deep desire to be loved and understood it burns us when we feel misunderstood or unloved. Seems as though no comfort can ever be found for us. But fear not my friend, there are many who do understand you. With time you will find them. With patience you will keep them. ~*Dark Enchantress*~ "Enjoy the little things in life, for one day you may look back and realize they were the big things." -Antonio Smith |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Maharet is right, we here understand. I too quest understanding and the love brought forth from it. I have found that here in Passions with special friends and my kindred soul Sven. It has given me the courage to search more in my own life here as well. Draw strength then go find it my friend. ((HUGS)) Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Justbleu this was so true to the life of those who will not share. guess what though you can share with us and me !!! I loved this piece! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thanks guys...I'm really happy to have people that care sooo much around me!! I'm glad you liked this!! Bridgette |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
I like this poem, for I can relate with it so well!! I hope to see more of your poems around the board!! "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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