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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 2000-01-17 03:39 PM


Sick of drawing pictures
Fear of being nit picked
Feeling worthless
Through the eyes,
of the one you love
Drowning in sorrows
Hiding within
Needing to confront,
to explain the pain
Walking away instead
Knowing myself to be,
misunderstood
So inturn I do not talk
Viscious cycle for me
That I only perceive
This is detrimental
Someday maybe
I might be understood

© Copyright 2000 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2000-01-17 05:09 PM


I think we all must feel misunderstood at  some point in our lives.  I know I do a lot of the time.  But, if I recall, some of the greatest thinkers, and leaders were misunderstood.  So that is possibly a good thing!  I could relate to well to this poem, Justbleu.

 JOY


Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
2 posted 2000-01-17 05:16 PM


With the deep desire to be loved and understood it burns us when we feel misunderstood or unloved. Seems as though no comfort can ever be found for us. But fear not my friend, there are many who do understand you. With time you will find them. With patience you will keep them.
~*Dark Enchantress*~


 "Enjoy the little things in life, for one day you may look back and realize they were the big things."
-Antonio Smith


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-01-17 06:04 PM


Maharet is right, we here understand.  I too quest understanding and the love brought forth from it.  I have found that here in Passions with special friends and my kindred soul Sven.  It has given me the courage to search more in my own life here as well.  Draw strength then go find it my friend.
((HUGS))  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

4 posted 2000-01-18 11:07 PM


Justbleu this was so true to the life of those who will not share.  guess what though you can share with us and me !!!  I loved this piece!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
5 posted 2000-02-04 02:43 AM


Thanks guys...I'm really happy to have people that care sooo much around me!!  I'm glad you liked this!!

Bridgette

TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
6 posted 2000-02-04 03:32 PM


       I like this poem, for I can relate with it so well!! I hope to see more of your poems around the board!!

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

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