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~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128


0 posted 2000-02-02 07:29 PM


Lay your head down
And close your sweet eyes
Dream yourself away from
this horrible reality.

Dream...
Dream...
Dream...

Keep your eyes closed.
Keep dreaming
but never forget your
reality
and me.

Dream...
Dream...
Dream...

I want to stay like this
For an eternity
Cozy in your sweet
embrace
But never forgetting how to

Dream...
Dream...
Dream...




 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

© Copyright 2000 ~Venus~ - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-02 09:48 PM


this is great...sweet dreams...
I like the reality line...another good one...
you've been busy Venus, lots of new posts tonite...ahhhh inspiration...I'll take it when ever it comes...(smile)
janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



summer
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80
long beach .ca.usa
2 posted 2000-02-03 01:11 AM


i like this venus...it was sweet , but with a hint of true passion....keep up the great work...
Bronx
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
3 posted 2000-02-03 05:04 PM


Yes!-
I've felt like that before.  You never want a moment in time to end.  It is the single most perfect moment in your life.  And you shouldn't and won't ever forget it!
Poetically yours
Bronx

 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
4 posted 2000-02-04 03:34 AM


dream all you want...but don't forget reality...
i like that...


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