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Although it hurts... |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
You havent responded... you never do... how am i supposed to go on... when i'm left w/feelings tainted in blue?? You never tried to care... nor watched as i cried You treated me like a disease... Something that would eventualy cause you to die That's why you ran and you ran so far away but as soon as you left something inside of me screamed "stay" The something inside of me still lurks forever love seeking... Althought it hurts to do so... It's still beating...< !signature--> "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" [This message has been edited by starboards (edited 12-23-1999).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
And beating stronger with each passing day!! Wonderful Starboards  Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas.. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
I Shall Endure ... --Kess You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
The something inside of me still lurks forever love seeking... Althought it hurts to do so... It's still beating... And still beat it must. Wonderful descriptions Jennifer [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 02-02-2000).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Excellent starboards ....I especially liked the ending. "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I agree with all, the ending was great, but so was the whole poem! |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
hey starboards long time no type..ha ha ha ...i really liked this poem alot... i can pull this feeling in the blink of an eye...great job keep up the good work.. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Thanks you all for responding =) I havent been in the mood much for dark and dreary poems...sorry bout that! i miss you all!!! |
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