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hathor
Junior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-01-31 06:44 PM


How long will it be
until my life is gone
my pain is done
my fears are lost
my body is dead
my mind is free
how long will it be
until my life is gone

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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-02-01 05:26 PM


Hopefully 70 more years, but I understand the feelings portrayed in this.  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
2 posted 2000-02-01 06:59 PM


We all feel that way sometimes, and it's ok as long as you know your not alone...
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 2000-02-02 09:51 AM


Questions we have all asked ourselves at one time or another.
To stop wondering these things... is to give up part of our spirits... I enjoyed this for the mere fact that you stated this in few words and your point and much more came across beautifully.  

Jennifer  

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