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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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...so tell me... My precious one, what jagged glass have you bled upon, what color of pillow held your sweet head as you shed your endless tears upon the bed, whos ghostly hands carressed you in the night as you danced upon fresh graves in the moon light, what secrets do you hold as you whisper into the darkness,so cold? ...so tell me... My precious one, what darkness has your enchanted soul spun? There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Is this a question to us a-alibaster? I enjoyed the read let me know about my question!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Bojopy, Last eve as I wrote this it was a question to my self more than anything, but today as I re-read it could be a question to you or any here...... I am glad that you like it.... many thank yous.... There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
I also enjoyed it alibaster It's a question that can be given so many meanings and looked upon so many ways. Makes you think of your own morality. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Alibaster I don't know what this is all about...it made me think about someone questioning Cassanova or a spouse after they arrived home at 3:00 a.m. in the morning. I like the way you painted a romantic picture and left it to our imagination. James |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
...so tell me... My precious one, what darkness has your enchanted soul spun? Like to read your work. I love this question that you have asked here!  Nice form.Jennifer |
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