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Tony New Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5 |
There are no street lights in this alley... I am lurking in its shadows...I am the hunger of shadows. Standing alone...I'm trying not to think of you but your light pierces my darkness. Your love collides with my shadows... You were my wind and I was your chimes... I was your seed and you were my earth... Why couldn't we work it out...walk it through... talk it over...and find an answer somewhere in the night? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Tony, I really like this poem,and the emotions you express,I like the line "why couldnt we walk it thru" and the use of the word shadow , it gives the poem real imagery take care janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Lost loves, broken hearts and the eternal question - why? Enjoyed your poem very much! |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
this poem sent chills up my back. for some reason it almost scared me..the feeling of being alone is the darkest and will bring out the darkest poet in us..Your right baby no more dark ones, but this one was a great one to end our journey thru darkness... |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I could just see you in the alley in the hungar of shadows, Tony. Excellent descriptions! Joy |
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