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We Are Forever |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Oke...so it's not really dark...but I still wanted to share it. It's a combination of what he said and what I did...since we both feel the same.  There was nothing before you, time parts for every word you speak My mind is left numb with the comprehension My heart is soaring with a joy that cannot be caged, and here I sit No need for words for we are one being Like two entangled together, connected at the core, digging deep within ourselves You are a glowing ember, burning inside my heart and leading me into your arms A sweet release into your soul which is what truly makes me whole I could spend my whole life swimming the depths of your soul Whisper of love, but unable to define what it is that I feel for you, for it defies all boundaries No matter what the distance, you're always alive inside me I can feel you and even if I were struck blind, I would see you You with your blessed soul that shines like a star The most beautiful flower growing in the garden Even though we are not together in the world, I don't shed a tear for I know that you are here with me And we will meet again for you see as friends or as lovers, we are forever < !signature--> "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 02-02-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is beautuful, I love it...very nice I'm glad you did share it here. janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Jaime they don't always have to be dark, this is so beautiful and heartfelt I'm glad you did decide to share it with us. Thanks Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you Janet and Isis...I really do appreciate it. I just felt it too strongly to keep to myself... "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This poem is full of strong feelings, I love it ! |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you very much Munda. I was hoping that it would reflect the strong emotions that I felt in my heart...*sigh*...but before I start talking forever ('cause believe me I could) I'll just stop now. Once again I thank you. "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
I don't think it is dark I think it is beautiful!! It has such strong feelings... It's great it really is I am thrilled that you decided to share it with us!! "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish" |
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lost Junior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 16New York, NY |
I loved this poem, thanks for sharing it! I hope I can write something so beautiful someday. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you TanAngel and lost...anyone could write this if they felt the way I did...so don't worry hun. < !signature-->"They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 02-02-2000).] |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
It's wonderful how you express your feelings so well. Enjoyed it very much! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I usually have the attention span of a gnat, and can't get through long poems. This one is exceptional No need for words for we are one being Like two entangled together, connected at the core, digging deep within ourselves You are a glowing ember, burning inside my heart This is my favorite passage Jennifer |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you childomine and Jenny....I really appreciate your reply. I know what you mean Jenny...I was hoping that this one would be entertaining enough to read. Once again...thanks. "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
To love and be loved like this. *sigh* Wonderful words... Jannel |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you very much Jannel. "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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