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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
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0 posted 2000-01-31 08:47 AM



Small stains resting casually on crushed velevet dress
Alibaster fingers daintily wipping absently at the precious mess
Satin covered feet
silently absorbing the cobblestones' heat
Full pink lips
savoring the succulant drips
Returning, saticfied to her sanctuary of candlelight
with calmed hunger and quenched thirst she shivers
with ease this sanguinary night.


 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster

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Jannel
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
1 posted 2000-01-31 12:59 PM


Beautiful imagery. I especially like the first two lines.
Jannel

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-02-01 05:29 PM


Excellent imagery  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 2000-02-02 10:00 AM


Satin covered feet
silently absorbing the cobblestones' heat


Beautiful and so visual...
I could feel every description.
Well Done  


Jennifer Lee


[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 02-02-2000).]

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