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~Tapestry of Poets~...inspired by...and dedicated to all the amazing poets found here |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Tapestry of Poets~ Putting pen to paper, Exchanging words for rhyme. Sharing a hearts sentiment... Capturing a life's moment in time. Expressions of affection, Portraits of old pain. Confessions from a souls shadow, A poets wisdom to gain. Creating tapestries of emotion, Woven with affirmations of gold. Whispered promises echo in the night, Unveiling a prophets vision to behold. Redemption confirms our presence, Fate then casts a guiding light. Revealing secrets of our past... Allows our souls to take flight. Janet Marie-1/30/00 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Very well done. I really like this part. Expressions of affection, Portraits of old pain. Confessions from a souls shadow, A poets wisdom to gain. The fact is we all gain a little knowlegde about our sevles when it comes to wrighting. There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all (Creed) baerlon |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Janet, What a beautiful poem with beautiful nuances. I agree about the soul's shadow bit too!! It is certainly like that for me. Thanks for dedicating it to all the fine poets here.  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Lovely. Every bit is true and from the heart. There are poets of every shape of kind here. Joy |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Very sweet! Thanks for dedicating it to all of us wonderful writers here at Passions. You guys know how to make someone feel welcome! *tear*  ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Janet Marie I think you pretty much covered all the different posibilities. Writing has helped me deal with my fears and explore my fantasies. Wonderful flow...I always enjoy reading your poetry. James |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Great- I really liek the tapestries of emotion part. It was really great! Poetically yours Bronx |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
janet i loved this. thanks for dedecating it to all of us on this board. keep up the good work. True beauty is often hidden in darkness... ~Jesse C. Jaymz~ |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Creating tapestries of emotion, Woven with affirmations of gold. Whispered promises echo in the night, Unveiling a prophets vision to behold. Lovely sentiments Janet. It's a great place here, that lets us express ourselves in our own unique ways Jennifer Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
This is a beautiful and true dedication. It reminded of a verse in one of my favorite songs. "I am stepping through my shadow. Coming out the other side. Stepping through my sahdow Finding out What I've tried to hide." very well done. Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Janet... you last two lines reminded me of something i forgot...that it's only when ypu'll mbrace your past you'll take a step ahead in life... or like you put it so beautifully... past secrets revealed...for the sould to take flight... i loved it...honestly Avanti |
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lost Junior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 16New York, NY |
I too thought this was great. I liked the last line the best "Allows our souls to take flight" I think that's true about writing and also when you read someone else's work you can identify with. |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
Great job ....this really expressed our feelings...I learn so much here in this forum...thank you for sharing your poetry i learn from all of it... |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Great job!! It showed great emotion! Thank-you for dedicating it to all of us!! There are definitly some really talented poeple here! "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Janet Marie, your talent amazes me more every day. Great job !  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This was wonderful!! Putting pen to paper, "Exchanging words for rhyme. Sharing a hearts sentiment... Capturing a life's moment in time. Expressions of affection, Portraits of old pain. Confessions from a souls shadow, A poets wisdom to gain." Was my favorite part!! Your style and word usage I loved!! Very nice!! Take Care Bridgette Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Jan Yeah I dug this one up LOL. I am looking at past work of yours, seeing as how I much intrigued. I really liked this. What a wonderful tribute to all the fine poets at this site. Passions is composed of some of the most dedicated, sincerest, inspirational people I have ever had the pleasure of writing with. thank you all who make each day here a blessing for me. amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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blueyz75 Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 138IL |
We definatly all bring our own colors to the tapestry. Each one of us different and unique! Kelly I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman |
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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
Amazing poem Jm ...u really outdid yerself..another masterpiece i like this para very much ...i mean i can totally relate to it.Redemption confirms our presence, Fate then casts a guiding light. Revealing secrets of our past... Allows our souls to take flight. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Amen and Wow! This is wonderful. Truly one of your best I've read so far. Absolutely loved it. Michael |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
wonderful poem and it reminded me of how much i enjoy reading all th epoems i see here at dark passions. all the people here are so sincere and very sympathetic. it makes my day to come in and read all the great poems people write epeciall yours. i have a few other fave poets here too. you guys are all great. great tribute. aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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