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Dark Poetry #1

Sounds of Pain

hathor
Junior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 17

0 posted 2000-01-30 07:56 PM

Thoughtful sounds
found all around
sounds of pain
fear and agony
heard from screaming
mouths of the young

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

1 posted 2000-01-30 11:12 PM

hathor: this one brings the image of concentration camps to mind *shivers*... disturbing...

sincerely,
jerome the boy with the radiation suit

A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

2 posted 2000-01-31 07:48 AM

Your poem brought tears to my eyes It brought to mind all of the children who scream out - whether aloud or in silence.

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

3 posted 2000-01-31 01:17 PM

Agreeing with Jerome on the shivers. Interesting that you describe childrens' screams as "thoughtful sounds."
Jannel

hathor
Junior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 17

4 posted 2000-01-31 06:38 PM

Jerome-
When I wrote this I wasn't thinking of concentration camps. I was thinking of the pain that me and a close friend of mine go through everyday.
-hathor

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