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hathor
Junior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-01-30 07:52 PM


I bid adieu
to the happiness I've never met
to the life worth living I've never lived
to the loyalty I could only dream of
I say hello and welcome again
to the pain I can never forget
to the agony I've always felt
to the fear I have always known

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-01-30 09:16 PM


hathor,
so much sadness in so few words...
yet so emotionally strong. All your posts here tonight say so much,with so few words.
I love them all. I hope you find strength in writing them. Take care, janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



poetry_kills
Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
2 posted 2000-01-30 11:11 PM


hathor: beautiful... sadly beautiful... i sincerely adore it...

as always,
jerome the boy with the radiation suit

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-01-30 11:29 PM


Say adieu to the bad and the darkness then say bonjour to the happiness awaiting you in your future.  We all must do this  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



hathor
Junior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 17

4 posted 2000-01-31 06:40 PM


Isis-
I would if I could, but truly don't think that I can.
-hathor

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