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Auricom45 Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 19Hialeah, Florida in the U.S.A |
Invisible You won't see me Staying to see your anger You won't see me Holding this grudge any longer You won't see me Cry my tears You won't see me In so many years You won't see me Fighting all your battles You won't see me Telling you that it matters You won't see me Living a lie You won't see me To say goodbye You won't see me Hiding in the darkness You won't see me To see a boy so worthless You won't see me To take my last breath You won't see me So solve of what's left That strange feeling we had in the war. Have you found anything in your lives since to equal it in strength? A sort of splendid carelessness it was, holding us together. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Powerful emotions here...good job! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So sad, you are feeling down today, right me if you need to talk. I am here if wanted. (HUGS) Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
You WON'T see me NOT replying to this great poem.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this poem is so good..strong in emotions and your message... I really like the way you ended it too. Take care, Janet Marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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