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Passnot Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18 |
If I go If I go There will be no more problems The day will be it's clearest Time stands to be truthful If I go Happiness will come Calmness bestows maddness Love holds loyalty If I go Life will go on Nights stay Nights Days stay Days If I go I will not come back There will be no more problems Happiness will come Life will go on When I go |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Great poem. I know this feeling all to well, but please, don't go. G Regret not what you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Don't go stay with us, you are welcome here, and part of our family. I too have felt this way. (HUGS) Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Passnot, sad, sweet, beautiful poem...if you go...go somewhere that you will be appreciated...make your own sunlight... find your own happiness. Take care, Janet Marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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