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nirvana New Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 9 |
Demons Grin Blinded by the spike Devoured by addiction Tainted blood and poison Lost in the affliction Speeding like a freight train Through tracks of veins decayed Forever lost in time Silence loudly played Lonliness is knocking On mirrored panes of glass Memories of yesterday Only come to pass Broken hearts are littered Where demons left and smiled Now there is a junkie Where once there was a child. Nirvana |
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ChainedAngel Member
since 2000-01-07
Posts 55tx |
Yet i didn't completely understand it and i have many conclusions to this poem but too unsure to ask if they are true. I really liked the line "Silence loudly played" i like those lines like that... its kind of like my signature. nice job nirvana  There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead - B. Warner |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
..."broken hearts are littered"... this poem is very well written, with so many great metaphors and visions. very good work. the ending is powerful. Janet Marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
Powerful last lines. And the title fits well. Jannel |
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