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From Velvet Gloves
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From Velvet Gloves |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA 
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From Velvet Gloves Vampire's Mistress Hands Wrists feed gutteral Hunger moans for blood Rattle more than January windows Wiped in circles Revealing wet night Shuttering Under gray polyester Day thatched roof cover flat-lined streets Back-Streets Malls of pleasure taking Dollars Fisted Stolen Deep Dark Kisses Hard Currency exchanged in open-air Markets for small rushed Lush Red Liquid Metal Draught from white voluptuous eagar throats Mourning songs rise with bells Mistress wakes Peeling velvet gloves. [This message has been edited by haze (edited 01-13-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Very darquely erotic haze... kudos...  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'll second that, and add a well done!!  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
LR...Isis Big Thank you's. This is really a new venue for me. I was stretching for this. I usually prefer the beat-genre and contemporary forms. Most of my work goes into adult just because I tend to irreverence latley. I look forward to visiting more often here. Thank you again... ~haze "I shall leave nothing before matchsticks." |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I'm not sure what this was about---can you help me? "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I really need help with this one I truelly do not get it? Maybe just a hint.. "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
Bojopy...The Vampire's mistress wears velvet gloves to cover the stains left by her amorous knight. He goes out, she waits, eager to please him (despite where he's been-what back street brothels he has roamed) with her warm and sainted blood. Haha...thank you for trying "I shall leave nothing before matchsticks." |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Oh my gosh what a wicked mind on you haze!!!! I understand now and really like it!!!!!!! WOW I've never been stumped before. kudos to you |
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merely_a_jester Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 67Arkansas... that's all you get |
truely beautiful and dark i loved it and that's not a stretch merely_a_jester |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I loved how you approached this piece. Dark and erotic without being blatent! Excellent Jenny Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome to my world Haze. . . you are indeed a voice that speaks well of the darkness. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh Haze where are you I haven't seen you post in awhile. Can you post some more? I admire your style....James |
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