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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-01-28 01:16 PM

Her voice still echoes in my dreams
Her body still moves through my thoughts
To love her, she deemed
I would have to myself become lost

Her touch still graces my cheek
Her mouth still touches my lips
She was the one that I had sought to seek
From her cup, I did more than sip

Her eyes still see through my soul
Her hair still flows in my eyes
In her presence, I became whole
In her arms, she comforted my cries

Now, standing here by the bay
Her spirit says to me, "Come my heart"
In return, I whisper to the wind and say
"I must go. . . and make a new start"

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-01-28 06:03 PM

Oh God Sven, *tear* you poetic thing you.
This is so moving, just once I wish someone could feel that for me, and put into such beautiful words as you have...
You gifted thing

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

2 posted 2000-01-28 09:14 PM

sven: absolutely gorgeous poem... i like to fancy myself the type that would continue to love even after death had claimed my love, but i certainly identify with this sentiment... wonderful work and very touching...

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no kool-aid

A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-01-28 10:12 PM

this is a truly beautiful and amazing piece of art...and a loving tribute...I was moved by its words. Janet Marie

Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

4 posted 2000-01-29 06:01 AM

What a great poem Sven. I saw you standing by the bay....amazing !

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