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I Want To Fly Again |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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I hear the distant rhythm A heartbeat pulsing soft and low Is it coming from within Help me please for I don't know. A saddened heart has no peace A dark and endless pit Of happiness gone forever Just a pawn, a tool, a hit. Only more grief coming Through fog I can barely see Rays of hope and sunshine A respite from apathy. You offered me the seagulls wing So I might fly and soar And just like a seagulls passing My heart can soar no more. Love is not so easy Not a simple thing For often it leads to pain No end to suffering can you bring. I want to fly again, Free souled and with you, But alas you are so far away There is nothing I can do. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Climb upon my outstretched wings Let me take you higher From up here, you can surely see The wonders laid before you Your heart has the strength of many For it carries us all each day To know the love you truely seek This pain you must endure Free your soul and never again Speak of saddened heart Disperse the fog… Embrace the hope Bask in morns sunshine Come with me my friend And let us fly this night Tonight… I am not far away The world is very small And I am here… to help you soar [This message has been edited by FreeByrd (edited 01-21-2000).] |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
Isis: i've identified with this piece a number of times in my life... but you will fly again... this poem touches the depths of longing and loss and as a result touches the heart of humanity itself... it's extremely good sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
FreeByrd thanks so much for the beautiful response poem *tear* you have touched my heart deeply. I would fly any day with you my friend.  And Jerome the boy with no brain, you write exceedingly well for someone with no brain. Thanks for your comment too Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Are we missing a certain someone across the long waters Isis? I am here hun let me know! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I feel this one Isis, for I fly solo...well done. |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
ISIS: Flying is a difficult thing to achieve after heartbreak (if that's what you're talking about) but I'm sure you can do it. You are an excellent poet!  ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
isis, i know your pain. i have flown alone for along time. and the one that i love is far away. around 500 miles. so for now i fly alone. your peom hit home so much that it made me cry. right now i am trying to get back home to her before valitines day. i hope i can do it. for she is my only happiness in this cold broken heart of mine.  all i want is to be in her loving arms again. and feel a warmth in my heart that nothing can replace. for now all i can do is stare at her picture and cry myself to sleep. well it is hard for me to see threw these tears so i must say goodbye. i loved the poem. and thank you for all the kind response to me work. see ya around the forum.True beauty is often hidden in darkness... ~Jesse C. Jaymz~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Jesse, sorry my poem upset you. Though it is a compliment if someone cries from reading your work. Please accept an understanding (HUG) I am here if you need to talk. And yes I certainly will see you round the forum Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Please see my response to this "Fly" in OP5 --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Osiris Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 20 |
I am new here to DP but it doesn't take a rocket scientist to see that you seem to have a few aerial admirer’s here. Like your work |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks one and all. GAW solo flights in unison then huh? (HUGS) and thanks Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sven, Loved the poem from op5 thanks my heart. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I come in to read one poem and what do I get ? Two beautiful poems ! AWesome !  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oops, even made me hit the button twice [This message has been edited by Munda (edited 01-29-2000).] |
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