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Passnot Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18 |
Surrender Coming to ends of pathway's exit Shortest routes in time's eternity First drop of leaves dying in beauty Yesterday's dreams measured in gold Tomorrow's nightmares waiting to unfold Sighted upon crying intentions Within tragedy's shadow premonitions Beyond destination peaks astrayed He speaks upwards in his smile alone But mind's loudness reality shuts off all tone Closed rooms of passions descend Only door reached by close friends As nothing seems surely supported I take one last moment to look over life distorted Over now with no more grieves Freedom at last, fallen leave |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
How sad what a lonely life to lead. If this is you I send (HUGS) and assurance that it does get better..  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Passnot, this is a very beautifully written poem, while its expressions are sad, your emotions are written so honestly and with grace. I hope you found strength in expressing these feelings... (One of the real gifts of poerty)Take care. Janet Marie ..."She says baby, It's 3am I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it." Matchbox20 |
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