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hathor
Junior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 17

0 posted 2000-01-23 05:35 PM

I will wait for you
through my days
of pain and sorrow
and through my days
of happiness and love
i will wait for you
at the ends of the earth
until the end of my days
i will wait for you
you will be with me
in my days of
happiness and love
you will be there for me
through my days
of pain and sorrow
you will live with me
at the ends of the earth
you will always love me
until the ends of my days
until our time shall come
i will wait for you

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-01-23 06:17 PM

Sadly beautiful poem full of longing. Well done!

Denise

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-01-23 06:24 PM

Felt the longing and pain, sad but well done

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

3 posted 2000-01-24 02:20 PM

Very well done
so Melancholy

Richard

Devin
Junior Member

since 1999-08-23

Posts 29
Oviedo,Fl, USA

4 posted 2000-01-24 08:38 PM

It's nice. I like it. Keep up the good work.

Never lose hope, even the darkest nights have ends.

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

5 posted 2000-01-25 02:29 PM

Lisa,
Hey that a great poem. But who are you talking about in that poem!
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

hathor
Junior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 17

6 posted 2000-01-25 06:30 PM

Neala-
All I can tell you is that it is NOT Bobby. No chance in hell.
-Hathor

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

7 posted 2000-01-26 10:23 PM

great poem. the longing and emotion is great. i loved it.
let your soul fly...

True beauty is often hidden in darkness...
~Jesse C. Jaymz~

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

8 posted 2000-01-26 10:47 PM

hathor: lovely piece... i feel this way often myself... i really like the line that you use to envelope the rest of the poem, very effective...

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no corndog

A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

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