Dark Poetry #1 |
Exposure |
ARCADIA Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23 |
So what everyone thought... Needless worry as you lay naked Among the sheet of sorrow Displayed at another victims feet So what everyone said... What was right Though made you STARK MAD Raving with blazed fury Of what could of been Should of been SO so beautiful And now you sit in awe And wonder... Wonder why you are so bare... Wonder how to clothe your soul... Your mind...body? Exposed for all to judge... But what the don't see Is YOU |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think we tend to shy away from showing our true souls....except perhaps in our poetry. I like the way you write. |
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ARCADIA Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23 |
Poet deVine...yes...we do hide...behind an image that was ortrayed by society...what people can't understand we tend to judge and cast away...peotry is our soul..written out in words..still so powerful because hidden is who we really are. thankyou for your reply |
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