Dark Poetry #1 |
bite the bullet |
nirvana New Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 9 |
Bite the Bullet Sucking on a loaded gun Master of my fate Gazing into vacant dreams Encompassed by the hate All alone in an empty chair Slowly sinking down Stomach sick and turning The doctor's out of town Little dancing Prozac In puddles bright and red Now I lay me down to sleep Overdosed on lead. Nirvana |
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ARCADIA Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23 |
Nirvana...Deep... It took me off guard...Powerful...Is this about someone you know? |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Your poem is good..though it scares me to think that someone may actually want to do this...I hope it's not your experience that you write about..if it is, I'm so glad you are past that point... |
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