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While you Drempt
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While you Drempt |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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While you Drempt I walked silently to your house late last eve I tiptoed through your door watched as you drempt sweetly wept at your side, sinking onto your floor Whispered tenderly into the darkness, I love you, my Sweet brushing back your satin locks cletching desperatly to the edge of your sheet I shadow danced with your body held you so very close to mine I wandered to your bathroom traced your face in your mirror, every line I created images of you in the scent of your cologne promising to never leave your sweet heart empty, alone and along the journey through you,I dropped a tear Please forgive me for dreaming of you here Please forgive me my Sweet, for loving you in your slumber, year after year I kissed your precious head as you drempt tenderly in your bed... There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Osiris Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 20 |
beautiful words wonderfully painted |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
Isn't is wonderful to watch those we love as they sleep. *sigh* Beautiful. Jannel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is very beautiful...I love the images this poem brings to mind...very well written, I feel the emotions your describing. Janet Marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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