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Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 391


0 posted 2000-01-18 11:49 PM




Serene fugues that portray
  a construsive perforcing fey
Alaned & forlorned by ability
  and looking away from any debility

Mealy in mind with an idle
Prudence though in a primitive title

Babbling & dabbling
  an undertow of time
Concealing a century
  of an unworthy kind

Somehow in all lifes ways
          & its internal days
I've sunk further in its future
                        of its past
So now this day is...........

           the only one that lasts
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"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)







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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-01-18 11:51 PM


Well Bojopy I hope the one day that lasts for you is a good one, filled with love and joy  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 2000-01-19 12:22 PM


Darnit! Back to the dictionary! From what I did understand, I think it may be about living for today and not dwelling in the past or fretting over the future. Am I on the right track?!? I really have had enough of looking up words for a few days!  
Another good one Bo.

Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

3 posted 2000-01-19 12:27 PM


I somtimes dwell in the past.  I always think about past loves and many other things but mostly love.  sorry for the dictionary thing lol

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



kitkat
Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
4 posted 2000-01-19 01:42 AM


I liked this very much. I too dwell sometimes of the past. Glad to see you back.
Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

5 posted 2000-01-19 02:35 AM


Thanks kitcat for the kind words!  I am here too stay!!!!!!!!!!!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
6 posted 2000-02-02 09:29 AM


B, this had an old world type feeling for me  
I enjoyed much!


Jenny Lee

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