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Tears |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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Tears, so painful so hard and so shameful yet so cleansing and pure Tears, so needed for pain left untreated when nothing can bring you a cure Tears, so bad too often made sad by people in more ways than not Tears, so good 'cause sometimes we should when something hits you in "that" spot Why do we cry? think I'd rather die than show my weak side to someone But then when you can and still feel like a man you feel intimately close to that one Emotions' extreme your hearts' way to scream the "door" is completely pushed open Your soul can be read no words need be said so much without words can be spoken With life will come pain with warmth will come rain and tears are a hearts way of storming When all goes to hell and 'till all is well they'll come without notice or warning Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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DayDreamer Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 30 |
I know how it can be with tears...it's hard, isn't it? I like your writing style. Good poem. ~DayDreamer |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Indeed those old tears creep up on you, sometimes in the most embarrassing of situations. (HUGS)  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I liked this poem and hey, like I always tell everybody...go ahead and cry...it will make you feel better. It works for me. James |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Thank you all very much for your comments and input... This is even hard for me to post this, knowing people even see it... Why is crying so hard?? LOL |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
To one man to another "REAL MEN CRY" It is a good way to release stress and feelings we did not know we had. I enjoyed this piece and the way men are not supposed to cry..good work. "To feel is to be alive" in my book "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Your soul can be read no words need be said so much without words can be spoken A profound and true statement. I enjoyed very much !!! Jennifer Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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