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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Eyes unable to open much above a crack Head falling back and forth, on my weak and unstable neck So very unrealistic the world seems through these eyes So tired and lifeless it seems So gone, never to return Never? Could that really be so? Please, if yes then do not tell For my head pounds as it is Losing consiousness now... Opening my eyes gets harder and harder and in my absence, I am consumed sorry for the slight wackiness...I really couldn't see when I was writing this...thankx for your time  "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Maybe I am wacky too! For this didn't seem so strange to me. Drowning in blindness is part of the dark poet's back bone LOL Well done regardless hon Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thankiez Isis... maybe it was just becuz i hadn't slept in 4 days...but who knows.."They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
This is really good. Being "wacky" is what makes poetry, poetry. Otherwise you ramble on about nothing and repeat yourself enough times to make the person reading it sick. But I think it is great. I also hope that you keep writing your "wacky" poetry!! "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish" |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thanks TanAngel...I appreciate the reply. And you're right...poetry wouldn't be poetry without something "wacky" going on. "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Opening my eyes gets harder and harder and in my absence, I am consumed Be it wacky or not...I enjoyed this very much DE Jennifer Lee |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you Jenny "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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