Dark Poetry #1 |
A Lifestyle In a Poem |
baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
It is peace away from reality It is ones way to vent anger And yet another’s way to remember happiness They say what dare not be said Show what dare not be shown Our little secrets drip out A sweet nectar like no other Riddles upon riddles Many look for the meaning Yet only one knows for sure baerlon This one really does not belong in dark passions but i thought you people might enjoy it. It is about what we all came here for "POEMS" and the fact that everyone claims they know what a poem means but truely the only one who knows is the writer. We all have differnt expirences that lead us to diffent conclusions. Which is perfectly fine as long as you enjoy it. Thanks for reading |
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Wendy Flora Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 182Virginia |
Love it! Loveitloveitloveit! -wen "I am everything you want I am everything you need. I am everything inside of you That you wish you could be I say all the right things At exactly the right time But I mean nothing to you And I don't know why." -"Everything You Want" Vertical Horizon |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
baerlon, I really like this poem...and you are right...we all read our own experiences and feelings into the poems...and only the author truly knows its deepest reasons...but for me..that is the real gift of both writing my own-- and reading others works...as both-- helps us heal and give us strength, and gives us each others wisdom to learn from these "lessons of life". I like this poems message... "They say what dare not be said Show what dare not be shown Our little secrets drip out A sweet nectar like no other" very well said. Janet Marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
True words spoken here! Very, very, true! So enjoyable, baerlon! |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Thank you all I am glad you enjoyed this for that is the reason i posted it. baerlon For we have crossed many oceans And we labor in between In life there are many quotients And I hope I find the mean (Creed) |
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