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Quiet Lightning Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56 |
feel free to comment Multiple pain My heart bleeds because of the pain My tears flow continously like the rain all I do is sleep because the situation I live is deep I feel no love I search for a hug I'm so young but I store alot of hate I experienced a broken heart at an early age It's not the pain of a bruise It's worse than being abused Full of sorrow and depression Eating and sleeping became an obsession All I can say is I cry like rain my heart bleeds because of the Multiple pain |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Wonderful expression QL. Very nice piece, I enjoyed the read. It's sad how the pain and sadness starts so young anymore. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Very Intense...... To learn to have such rage at an early age, I find frightening. Well Written. Jennifer Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Time cures youth and broken hearts... you have talent quiet one. |
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