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The Change
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The Change |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
I feel a change is happening I'm willing to let it come To shed the bruised and deadened skin that has encased my soul Released from the constraints of a bitter past I will be cleansed of my mistakes Finally able to leave it all behind The beauty, hope, and strength consumed by this lifeless shroud will soon be set free So that I may stand before you No longer afraid to be seen |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
A feeling of coming out of a shell comes to mind when reading this....I really liked it.......Bojopy |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Bojopy- Exactly what it is. Glad you enjoyed it. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Jenny adores this Danni!! I so enjoy your work  Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
once again the voice of the angel may not be heard by everyone, but i have heard and felt, what you say. you my dear angel are a poet of the heart, the most remarkable kind. mo |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This poem is like a breathe of fresh air after being locked in a cave for your entire life. To face not afraid of being seen for who you are, nothing could be more refreshing. Beautiful job. Michael |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Jenny- thank you so much. I take that as a wonderful compliment as I too greatly enjoy your work. Mo- You leave me breathless with the things you say. It means so very much to me. I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Micheal- Thank you. Latley it feels as though I have been taking a breathe of that fresh air. It is wonderful. |
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Niemczak Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 51 |
Like a butterfly breaking from it cacoon, I loved this! |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Well, I think I know the story behind this one. I'm very happy for you and the opportunity you're getting to "change". Change can be very good! |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Niemczac- thank you. Glad you liked it. Lostboy- I suppose you do know some of the story behind this. But there are many things that have brought this on. I'm sure you'll end up hearing about those sooner or later too. |
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