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Tony New Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5 |
Walking... The park is dark but we go there... The sound of our footsteps muting the silence... We walk the long way... Standing under the stars... The evening sighs when we sigh... The darkness glows with our heat... We stand with lips blistered from kisses... Walking... We pass again the empty fields... The sound of our unspoken...I love you's...muting the silence... We walk together into the night... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well, Tony, I'm not sure this poem is "Dark" in nature but it certainly was enlightening. Welcome to Passions in Poetry, hope you will look around a little. Look forward to seeing more of your work. Michael |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
When two people walk in darkness together, well like tony said we glowed.our unspoken i love you's met more than a million words said..This is another great one. I love you |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Very good poem Tony ! And Welcome from myself also  Jenny Lee Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Not exactly dark but very good... and nice to read in here once in awhile |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Lovely imagery used in this poem, Tony. I liked the way you described passing the fields and the stars while incorporating your love for someone. JOY |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Very nice piece, puts the reader on that walk, feeling the romance. Hope to see more of your poetry. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
The night always seems to be one with our emotions...when we know how to see it...beautiful poem Tony. You can be bright in nature but dark in being....something for us all to remember. "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'll go with Dark Enchantress on this one, and welcome Tony At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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