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Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-12-29 07:26 PM

I know now your problem,
So simple,
Why didn't I see it before,
Because you had locked and barred the door.

Your heart and soul are putrid,
Each day they decay a little more,
Bilious liquid escapes the wounds,
Cobwebs cover the door.

Selfish and sinning,
You only think of yourself,
How everything pertains to you,
See your black heart on the shelf?

What a living hell you must endure,
I see the why now, but still no sympathy,
A walking dead, you must journey alone,
In darkness, with no light or loyalty.

Can you return?
I do not know?
The journey would be hard and hazardous,
It is true indeed that old saying, 'You reap what you sow!'

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

1 posted 1999-12-29 11:33 PM

Indeed "You reap what you sow!" (Describes it perfectly)
Again, another powerful piece, Isis.

JOY

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-12-29 11:44 PM

Thanks Joy

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 1999-12-30 08:07 AM

Sometimes, we cannot see the problems until it is too late. . . you have seen them now. . . and have for a long time I think. . .

Excellent words Isis. . . powerful indeed

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 1999-12-30 06:29 PM

Thanks Sven and Happy New Year my friend

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Niemczak
Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 51

5 posted 1999-12-31 06:58 PM

Isis, again you have captured me, with your poetry. I will never get tired of reading it.

Andrew
New Member

since 1999-12-20

Posts 9

6 posted 2000-01-01 08:38 AM

Isis,
Pretty harsh words there indeed.I`m sure that if I was on the recieving end of that I`d be pretty upset.Also, It could be read as being about the person thinking these
things, very cleverly written.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

7 posted 2000-01-01 05:43 PM

Thankx

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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