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Dark Poetry #1

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Bathory
Junior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 11
OH.

0 posted 1999-12-26 10:42 PM

My heart was  worn and torn
  I wished to never be born but never now
my love healed my internal wounds.                                             packpray for the reams
of verses and curses
that haunted thy deathly dreams.
      As if it were
the first time evey night
she carved a seal in in the flesh of life.
   A discple of scars
   branded hated years behind
she was the one saved by the father of lies,
     took her soul never to die.
  Love,let us be true to one another!for the world,
which seems to lie before us like a land of dreams,
so kind, so beautiful,so new.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-12-26 11:23 PM

Bathory this was wonderful, please take a bow

Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas..
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Niemczak
Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 51

2 posted 1999-12-26 11:32 PM

That was excellent. I enjoyed reading it and feeling it.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-12-26 11:37 PM

'Tis an excellent poem. Perchance you are named after the Countess Elizabeth Bathory?

Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

Bathory
Junior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 11
OH.

4 posted 1999-12-27 08:05 AM

I thank all you kind people for your replies.

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

5 posted 2000-01-01 11:56 PM

Sorry it took me so long to reply to this one my dear. You shoulda told me you posted it.
Tis an excellent poem Kristi much love it.
And yes D.E. tis Elizebeth she is named after.

If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die.

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